Picture And Write It, Prompt #25


She was on her way home. The trip had been exhausting. She had met with all family members, some of them she didn’t know or remember. She had just laid her father to rest, in his home town. She had been flying back and forth to visit with him, and to deal with doctors and medications. She was his POA. He had been suffering with Leukemia for a little over a year. Each time she went to visit, she noticed slight changes in his body. The slow movement, the quietness, that once, used to be full of laughter. She was helpless in every way, other than letting him know that she loved him, and making sure he was comforted and cared for. She would take little treats to him, each time. She hoped that these small trinkets would heal her from her guilt, that she carried within, from not living closer to him. She had moved over five years ago, to take a better paying job. He had been very upset about it, as they both knew she was his favorite daughter. Her last visit had been spent with not leaving his side. Hanging on to every word he whispered to her. Giving him sips of water, and feeding him whatever he would agree to eat. He had lost so much weight, as his hunger diminished. He looked ten years older than he was. She laid on his bed, next to him, and held his hand, as God came down to take him home. Tears welled up in her eyes, as she sat in her seat on the plane and went over the last two weeks. She would love her father until she could no longer feel love. She didn’t realize her tears were falling, but her seat neighbor did. The lady who was sitting beside her noticed her tears and heard her soft cries. She reached out and laid her hand over her hand, and gave it a gentle squeeze. She patted her own shoulder and motioned for her to rest her head against her shoulder. Here the daughter weeped and began her healing journey.

 

 

19 thoughts on “Picture And Write It, Prompt #25

  1. This is so beautiful! It brought tears to my eyes. I too take care of an aging parent. I know the struggle you experienced in making the decision to move away. I have struggled with this same quandary because I too wanted to move across the country to explore other opportunities professionally and socially. I am sorry for your loss, empty words in your time of grief, but I wanted to thank you for your transparency. ~ Be well, Ayanna Nahmias

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    • thank you. life can be difficult, as we try to lead our own lives, doing what we need to do and still loving our families, but we must move on, not remaining stagnant

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  2. It is so hard to watch our parents age. My mom is doing so well but I see changes as I visit and the thought that someday I won’t be able to me is too much to think about. Nice writing.

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  3. This is stunningly beautiful – you’re so talent – can read between the lines that it’s all you there behind and you’re preparing your self for a journey of healing and sorry. Really loved this piece.

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  4. You did such a great job with this Angel writer Terry! What a blessing your stories are! god bless you and all He brings to you to do! love and prayers!

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  5. Beautiful story, Terry. Just a thought, you could alternate the pronoun “she” with “The Daughter”, and the pronoun “He” with “The Father”, It will help the story move along since there are no names given. The story touched the heart though…good job!

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  6. A very touching piece, Terry. Great work! I love all the different stories that can come from one image. Thanks for contributing to Picture it & write. 🙂

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