Feeling down feeling low
I am the target today
I feel like I am spinning out of control
My powers all taken away.
My age has no matter
My wisdom be gone
You think I have no mind at all
My smiles you have turned upside down.
You believe you are all so wise
But I guarantee that you’re not
You have belittled me enough
You disrespectful little snot.
Now you have left me ever so tired
Too weak to do a thing
No thoughts, no tears, come from within
No songs no hums to change this swing.
When you were only a small young child
The love I had would never part
Now you are grown and it only seems
You are here to break my heart.
I never dreamed it would be this way
I can remember the day you were born
I held you in my arms with joy and love
And now my heart is torn.
One day my child I will be gone
No more love to share
You will look back at these days
And wish you could go back and repair.
Now you have children of your own
Please treat them with respect and love
And hope that when they have completely grown
They don’t turn on you like you did to your one above.
Beautiful piece of poetry. It seems like so many people are being hit this week. Hope things were better for you today.
yes and no, but i made it another day!
One day at a time, God will always be there to carry through each one.
that is all i can do anymore, one day at a time, otherwise i get more tired than i am
amazing poetry = ) u must be inspired to come up with such beautiful pieces lately. they’re just so stunningly beautiful! = )
thank you Aina! that is a very nice comment….
I’m sorry Terry…it seems that you have had yet another heart-break…thinking of you…Diane
yes,what is up with this. do i have the word use me abuse me hurt me written on my forehead today???? lol
I so understand this!
i am glad that you do, because no one here does
sorry you’re hurting.
i will get past this too, i am always thankful for a new day and new hope. thank you
Stunningly written … even if I’m not a poetry person – it talks to me and I understand every word it says to me.
thank you Viveka. i hope you are going to have a great day today
Way to express how you feel! Very good!
thank you For
One of the signs of Judgement Day in Islam is when mothers will give birth to their masters, as in children who do not listen, obey, or respect their parents. I am more fearful of this. May you be close to God always… 😀
thank you i love learning…………..
Hugs and prayers for His grace and healing touch . . .and lots of love. I’m glad that you can get some of this out through writing, angel Terry. It is a good poem, that expresses what you were feeling and experiencing so well! When grown children disrespect us, it hurts deep. love and prayers!
yes it does, and for some reason it continues on and on