I went to bed too late
And woke up at six
I thought this isn’t right
Let’s sleep for kicks.
Fell back to sleep right a way
Dreamed heavily I know
For when I awoke my brain was charged
It was racing and on the go.
I could remember words that my mind had said
I was trying so hard to memorize them
I had no pen nothing to write them down
And now I’ve lost most of the gems.
The words I do remember
Are still stuck in my head
I can tell you what they were
Maybe you can figure out what was said.
As I lay here on the ground
And the guns are going off
I know that these people are trying
To silence me God don’t let me be found.
Well that is what I still remember, and the rest of the words were taken from my mind. I wish that I knew what the ending of this poem was and what I was actually trying to say. Maybe you can finish this. If you write something let me know so I can share with you.
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I cannot. I’m sorry! Next person . . . .
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It’s alright, you tried and you even stopped by to chat!!!
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I give up!
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Hi my friend, I have nominated you for the Family of Bloggers Award
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Oh that’s too kind of you Terry! Much valued!
By the way, please read my latest short story final destination
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I was reading some of your posts and commented
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It is ok. I love it that you just stopped by to chat!!!!
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Fantastic … Terry, but I can’t poerty and … my belief … you know.
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I have nominated you for the Family of Bloggers Award Vivkea
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it’s ok Viveka, I got the chance to chat with you, which is best of all!!!
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Hide me under your shadow, Keep me safe from harm, Protect me from mine enemies, Let your peace replace my fear and alarm. Well, I tried…..:)
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wow!!!! that is awesome!!!! you should write more poetry!!!!!!! great job!
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Thanks Terry, dibble and dabble with it, but I’ve never shared it except with a few.
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just a thought ………………
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Terry, I think it’s finished just as it is, although I like the completion of ValerieLoveLight 🙂
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thank you Angel, Valarie did a great job didn’t she!!!
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Is this a poem that you are writing, or one than you’re trying to remember? I know the feeling though. I lost one of best poems because it wasn’t memorised 😦
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I was rambling off a poem as I was drifting out of a deep sleep. I can still hear myself talking and saying the words. By the time I was wide awake this is all I could remember of what I had dreamed
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Ohhh, wow. I really hate when that happens. Waking up from a dream only to forget less than 5 minutes later what it was all about. Uff!
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me too sometimes parts of a dream will stay with me all day long
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Oh that is so frustrating when that happens! Hope it still comes to you!
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it would be nice, but i still can’t remember any more of it
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Nope got nothing but would like to know the ending too! Lol hugs Paula xx
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me too!!!!
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I’m not afraid to go
For You I do know
And though I would love to see my mother
I still need to be here for my brother!
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that is so beautiful Barb, and it is so me………………….you have much talent in stories
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Thank-you, but it was a fluke!
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nooooooooooooooooooo u have talent……….I win!!!!!
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