This was a lot of fun and many responded with honest answers of either not being poetic or giving an ending. I just loved being able to chat with all of you who dropped by. The poem started from a dream I was having. All I could remember when I woke up was these words;
As I lay here on the ground
And the guns are going off
I know that these people are trying
To silence me God don’t let me be found.
Valarielovelight responded with this ending;
Hide me under your shadow, Keep me safe from harm, Protect me from mine enemies, Let your peace replace my fear and alarm.
ltpen315,barb added this ending;
I’m not afraid to go
For You I do know
And though I would love to see my mother
I still need to be here for my brother!
Aren’t these beautiful endings? I love them both. Thanks everyone for stopping by and chatting with me and to Valarie and Barb for giving wonderful endings.
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Nice post! And, thank yo for the link back. God bless you!
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thanks Lyn, and so nice to meet you. Stop by for a chat anytime!!!
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I think we’ve talked before. My memory could be way off, because I talk to many people..so please forgive me if I’m wrong..but don’t you have a brother you care for? Or something like that? Or am I thinking of someone else?
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well you are right, i do have a brother that I did care for but now he is placed due to his condition worsening. I apologize for not remembering you. I am so sorry
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Oh, think nothing of it. I don’t care. Who am I? LOL We’re all nothing but tiny flecks of dust on the tip of God’s finger…and those who are puffed up with arrogant pride, even smaller… big in their own eyes, but the least in heaven. I don’t have pride like this, so don’t worry. I am not bothered or offended in the slightest. God bless you!
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I love what you said. tiny flecks of dust on God’s fingers. I absolutely love it and I will remember this phrase!!! thanks
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Wonderful feedback .. and very nice ending!
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thank you. they did a good job
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Fantastic endings!
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they did a good job didn’t they????
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Thanks for sharing some of the endings with us! Fun and beautiful!
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i thought they did a good job!!!
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Thanks, Terry.
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Enjoy the day, Terry! Hugs Paula x
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