A cry could be heard. ” Help me, please somebody help me.” A man who had been secretly living in the woods heard the echos of the voice. Stamping out his small fire he raced to the voice’s direction.
The man knew he would be trespassing but he had to help. He opened the barn door wide. His eyes adjusting to the dark inside. Yellow eyes turned in his direction. Fear took over the stranger. Urine ran down his pant legs as he saw the size of the beast.
In the corner standing on several stacks of hay was a young boy. Guessing to be around the age of ten he looked much smaller than the wild beast who had decided he was hungry.
The animal turned a way from the stranger. The size of the two humans was an easy quest to be decided. Smaller was better. He lunged at the boy and missed his mark as the target moved one more stack up.
The stranger picked up a shovel and charged the animal trying to hit him hard enough to knock him out. He got within inches when the beast turned and clawed him slapping him to the ground. The man rolled over a few times and bumped his head on something hard.
Turning back to his prey the creature honed in and leaped to the spot where the boy was huddled. With open jaws he managed to chomp down on an arm and dragged him to the ground.
The trespasser woke and saw what was happening. He had nothing to use. There was nothing to protect him in sight. He once again charged at the animal. He landed on top of the wild animal. He rode him digging his legs into the creature’s side.
The beast released his jaws on the boy and rolled his neck back. He saw his enemy and tossed him but the man clung tight. The two struggled in the hay strewn over the barn floor. Each fighting for their lives. There was no thought of the young boy any longer. It was man against beast.
The growls from the animal stirred a commotion among the barn animals. The lone sleeper in the house was awakened. Pa grabbing his boots and coat grabbed his gun. Racing to the barn just as the boy was climbing down the hay a gun shot was heard.
The noise startled the animal and he took off running out the doors. Pa had meant to kill the beast but at the second he pulled the trigger his son was running to him. He fell to the ground crying,” Papa, Papa it hurts.”
Papa ran to him throwing his rifle down. He picked up his son in his arms and gently rocked him back and forth. As he glanced in the direction of the strange man he tried to sooth his son by saying,”It’s going to be alright son. Oh God, I am so sorry son. I didn’t mean to hurt you”.
Please Almighty God let my son live. I didn’t mean to shoot him. It was an accident. Oh God help me.
The stranger lay in the spot the beast left him. Too weak to stand. Blood seeping from puncture wounds. Inside he was praying also, and cursing himself that he could do nothing but lay here and watch.
The sobbing from the young boys body became quiet. His boy lay lifeless as he died in his Papa’s arms. The stranger closed his eyes trying to keep tears in but they found their way and were running down his cheeks.
Papa grabbed his boy and hugged him tighter. ” I am so sorry son, I am so sorry. God, you didn’t listen to me. You ignored me. What kind of God are you that you would let an innocent child die? Where were you when I called out to you? Why, why did you ignore me? he sobbed into the rafters.
He held his son close to him kissing his forehead. He ran his fingers through his hair. Tears pouring out of his eyes he finally admitted defeat and lay him down on the hay. He curled himself in a ball and sobbed for his child.
How can I ever forgive myself for this? What have I done to my son? I can’t live with this. Where were you God when I needed you?
The stranger tried to move and was able to edge his way closer to the son’s papa. Pain was running through his body and he heard his own moans coming from his throat. Still he continued to move closer to the grieving man.
Something inside of the father stirred him to move. He sat up with blank eyes . A look of anguish plastered over his face.
Papa stood up and picked up his son. He walked out of the barn and laid the boy in the soft blades of grass. He walked back into the barn and grabbed a horse blanket. He placed it over his son.
He then walked to the stranger and knelt down.” Are you going to be alright? Are you hurt bad? I can see the blood coming from you leg. I will go in the house and call a doctor to get you some help.”
He reached for another blanket and covered the stranger. He walked towards the house and disappeared behind the front door. The stranger laid there moving his arms and legs. Checking out his damages. He knew he was going to be alright as long as he got help.
He laid there going over in his mind all that had just happened. He drifted in and out of sleep his body adjusting to the pain. Soon a shadow over came him and he opened his eyes to look into the doctor’s face.
The doctor was able to clean him up enough so that he could be taken in the car to his office. He walked outside and picked up the dead child and placed him inside the back seat of his car.
” Don’t you think we should let the father know we are leaving? I am sure he will want to come along for his son.”
” No, there is no need. I have already called for an ambulance. I knocked at the front door several times but no one answered. I looked through the window and saw a body on the floor. I went inside to find he had taken his own life. I think we should get you to a doctor.”
The doctor drove his car from the barn to the house. He carried the son’s body inside and laid it next to his Papa. Carefully covering both bodies he walked back to his car. The ambulance pulled up and the doctor motioned towards the open door. He then got in his car and drove towards his office to stitch up this man.
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OMG! Your fiction takes my breath away!
thanks Julie. this really means a lot to me
It may be fiction, but when I put myself in Papa’s shoes and put my own son in the story, my pain was severe. I cried. Very well written Terry.
thank you Harold for your comment. It moved me deeply
This is amazing writing. Terrific emotional story.
thank you Deana. It makes me happy that you enjoyed reading it
Exceptional writing. Keep it up!
thank you very much Boomer. I will give it my best try
Terry, I watch a movie called “The Words” yesterday … one of the better movies I seen for a long time – about an young writer that struggled until I he found a script in an old briefcase his wife bought to him during the honey moon in Paris and .. he publish it under his name .. then the rightful author look him up. Watch the movie. You will love it. This is an excellent story .. you know my “but”.
The Words sounds like an excellent movie. I will definitely try to find it. I love these kind of movies. Thanks for letting me know
I will do a post about it … when my netbook is okay, if it ever will.
Great, and I still hope your netbook will be ok
Thanks a million .. so do I – not more 2 years old. I learned a lesson now … not to eat and type on the same time.
I eat at the computer. I place a towel over my keyboard and use the mouse only for games, but with what you have, it is all in one piece so it won’t work so well. I guess you will have to decide which comes first, eat or internet. I do hope it will be alright sincerely
what a beautifully emotional story Terry. moved me to tears!
I am glad you enjoyed it. You are the Len who friended me on FAcebook aren’t you?
u betcha!!! 🙂
I was hoping because I don’t usually accept stranger’s invites. I just knew it was you!!!!! LOL
Wow! You kept up the suspense well. I didn’t see that end coming. Well done.
Thanks Diane. I always love it when you say I did a good job!!
You’re so talented Terry 🙂 I’m speechless
this just made my sad day into a nice smile. Thank you so much for giving me this comment at the perfect time
OH YAY! Always here Terry 🙂
I am at a coffee house reading this and you are bringing tears to my eyes. Awesome story!!
Hi Barb!!!!!! I will take a nice cup of coffee with cream please………………….thanks for a great comment my friend