He was tired. Poor John had been planning, saving and working so hard at his job. He was a third shift stock man at the local Wal-Mart store.
He didn’t make much but it paid the bills and put a little extra jingle in his pockets.
He had two children who were grown. One off to college and the other working in a local auto shop. His daughter Katie had been smitten with a boy in their neighborhood. Ben had grown up down the street a ways on the side of the street where all the nicer houses set side by side like dominoes.
Kate had grown up in a nice enough home too, but there was no keeping up with the Jones’s homes on this side of the street. Putting food on the table and shoes on feet were the priorities on this side.
Katie and Ben went to the same schools, same colleges. John guessed it would happen sooner than later. He always hoped for later. Katie was the apple of his eye. Bouncing curls growing up. A mouth full of questions. John could always count on his sidekick being with him when ever he puttered in the garage.
Ever since Katie had come to him and announced she was getting married John made it his number one goal to give her the best darn wedding he could afford. Ben’s parents offered many times to take some of the pressure off of John’s shoulders but he always insisted with a NO, and it isn’t a pressure, it is a pleasure.
Katie’s Mom had died a few years back from cancer. Although Katie was practically all grown up John feared she would always need a Mom in her life. He did his best to fill in on both ends.
Katie would have him go along with her to try wedding dresses on. Although John could be working on mower engines he never said no and stood against the racks of dresses with a smile on every time she came out of her dressing room asking, “what do you think Daddy?”
“You look beautiful darling, just like your Mom always did.” Kate would smile and go back in and the question would be repeated dress after dress. Instead of hiring a professional photographer, John had a good friend that had an eye for the camera. His friend didn’t charge the couple. He let this be his gift to them.
Flowers were cut from the back yard. John loved all shades of pink flowers. It didn’t matter what kind they were as long as they were pink, his wife’s favorite colors. John picked up extra shifts and made sure that the food and drinks were going to be the best ever.
He hired a small company to do all the cooking. Nothing special, just a rib filling kind of food. Sliced ham, new potatoes fresh from the garden, a nice bowl of fresh salads, the complete meal. The wedding cake was simple but he thought it was beautiful. Two tiers, pink flowers all around the edges on each layer. He splurged and had a tiny working fountain placed between the two tiers. This was his gift to his baby girl, the food and the cake.
The wedding went off without a hitch. Ben’s parents gave the two a nice fat check and this went towards a honeymoon to Niagara Falls. The wedding was paid for. His baby girl looked beautiful and the two were married. Now they were having fun on their honeymoon just like he and his wife did when they were young.
Everything put a way, John sat on the curb of Wal-Mart on his break remembering back to what once was and thinking about the new grandbabies he would hold some day, just like he and his wife used to do when their own kids came along.
He smiled to himself. Life is good. He was blessed, He worked hard and it paid off. He had raised a nice family. He got up from his sitting position. Break time was over. Time to start saving for those toys the new babies would need someday.
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Very sweet.
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thanks Tony!!!
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very interesting life John leads, thanks for sharing as always Terry!
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you are very welcome Talicha!!!!! Stop by and chat anytime!
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Will do!
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Delightful, Terry!
You are a terrific storyteller! I just love a happy ending!
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thanks Cliff, you always give me great comments. hugs
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No thanks, necessary all compliments were earned 🙂
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hugs my good friend
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What a great story!
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thanks so much Author. I love your comment
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Lovely story …. my talent friend. Life is good … most days.
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I love good days and I imagine you do also!!!
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Yes, I truly love good days …. and most of mine are, so I’m very lucky.
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🙂 Good ending. At first, I thought it will be a tragedy
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no, not this time, lol, thanks
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You have such talent for bringing a character to life and telling the story as though it were absolute truth. I would never have guessed it was fiction if I didn’t know. Nice work!
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I will take your wonderful compliment and store it in my memory box. Thank you so much Kellie. Words from you are better than gold!
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Terry — sitting here with happy tears running down my face…what a lovely story. Good writing is good reading and both elicit emotion … well done!!!
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Annie, your compliment sent my mood soaring. Thank you so much. I really appreciate your wonderful words
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Such an original and very pleasant, positive story.
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thanks so much Sky. I really appreciate your comment
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This definitely brought more than one tear to my eye. A beautiful read.
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I am so happy that you liked my story but sad it brought a tear.
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Exactly what so many people do day after day – and all to raise a family that can have their needs fulfilled.
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yes I agree. It is much harder now a days I think. Work is hard to find and so many children in a family plus kids not moving out of the nest so early. This all makes a big difference
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Great storytelling.
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thank you so much!!!!!
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