I saw you walk
I saw your smile
I saw your step
I stared for a while
I saw you
In my dream tonight
You smiled at me
And it felt so right
I saw her kiss you
I saw you respond
I felt such hurt
For you I had longed.
Written by,
Terry Shepherd
08/02/2013
It hurts so much to see the one you love loving on someone else…..this was beautiful, Terry. You have a gift.
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yes it does, I wish I didn’t know that feeling, thanks for the nice comment Skye
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Me too, Terry….me too. It stinks!!
You are welcome. 😀
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I agree, it hurts, but your poem about it is lovely.
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thank you Ute
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Such heartbreak in this one as we have all been there done that. hugs
*MY GOD IS AN AWESOME GOD!*
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yes, we have, it shouldn’t be that way
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true 🙂
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Tears on my face….wow!! Terry you write what I could never say. this is so heartfelt. This a pain no one should have to feel.
Thank you for sharing this. ~ Hugs friend,
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I agree, no one should experience this heartache, but we do don’t we at one point or another. hugs my friend
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It hurts, Terry, but it brings a beautiful poem in return. Pawkisses 🙂
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thanks Angel, I think most of us can relate in some little way to this poem. Thanks for a nice comment. You always spoil me with your words
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