Time & Place:
You find yourself in an elevator. The door closes and you see only five buttons. A sign hangs above them that reads: “Find Happiness.” Each button is a different color. Red, blue, green, orange and yellow. There are no other instructions and you must push one to get the elevator to move. Which color do you choose and why? Where does it take you?
I would pick the blue one because blue is tranquil. It must surely lead me into doors of peace and joy.
I opened the door
And walked into quietness
All I could see were more doors
Long halls no hanging pictures
Dingy gray carpet with the
Palest green walls I had ever seen
Have I made a mistake
Were my instincts wrong
I want peace but not lonliness
Maybe I should leave so I
Turn back but the doors are frozen
As if bidding me farewell
Reminding me I am all alone
Sitting on the floor
With knees drawn to chest
I cry in my arms as I
Realize another error
Was thrown at me
I looked about
Realizing I could not go back
Standing hearing my own breathing
I walked the corridor as
If I am standing on clouds
All the doors looked the same
As I went down one way then another
As I stood trying to make a right choice
I see one door that has a mark
Walking closer I see that an x
Is centered as on a dart board
I place my fingers gently on the knob
And feel the heat radiating piercing my fingers
I can’t let go I have already began
No more thinking no more choices
Turning the knob in hopes
Of making little noise
I walk in and grabbing
The wall I use my hands
To guide myself down to the floor
Unstoppable tears flow freely
My body shakes uncontrollably
Warm and tender arms wrap
Themselves around me
Sucking me in to their
Love gently standing me up
And I am in awe as I
Stand there staring into
The familiar faces
Of loved ones passed on
Terry Shepherd
03/08/2013
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love this expression of your by choosing a blue one, but I’ll choose orange one, for sure 🙂 as you can see on my post. i love that color.
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thank you so much Yunita. I enjoyed your post also especially the shoes
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hi Terry (would you mind by that call?),
you are very welcome, so did i. i also enjoyed your post. so much touching post, it moved one heart :). sincere.
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of course you can call me Terry!!!! I am so happy to know you enjoyed my post
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Love it… Thank you.
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thank YOU for taking the time to stop by, read and comment!!
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Terry…awesome … I picked blue as well!!
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Hi Annie!!!!!!! Blue is the best!!!!
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Wow! I felt my heart rushing as I felt your anxiety in the beginning and I couldn’t wait to read on to see what happened. Then a beautiful, inspired ending. Perfect! Well done, Terry. xox
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thank you Kellie, so glad you enjoyed this post!!!
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I loved the ending! If you get a chance read my post THE DOOR. It’s in the poems category. Great minds….
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I sure will my friend. Also thanks for the great comment
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Truly lovely written …. my friend, you are so talent .. you have all that inside just ready to come out. I would have pressed the green button … *smile
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green symbolizes ready to go!!!!!!! action!! thanks for a great comment Viveka!
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My pleasure, Terry.
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Reblogged this on cftc10.
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